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Friday, September 7, 2018

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My avatar: looks he’s been on a vacation to hawaii.

He has a cool nike hat his hats black with a white logo.

He has a white and red shirt and red shorts and some red shoes.

He has a beard but its short.

He has a really expensive necklace and some cool sunglasses.



And he’s a little bit fat and a little bit skinny.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2019 at 11:37 AM

    Kia ora. I’m Jordan from Parkview Parua school. I liked the way you talked about your Hawaii vacation. You told me he likes nike hats and Hawaii.
    You taught me how he likes hawaii tops.
    Maybe next time you could add more description.
    Can you please add a background so it’s not just white?

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2020 at 1:52 PM

    Hi blake i loved the avatar and i thout that it looks just like you and i lov e the description.

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