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Friday, September 14, 2018

Dark Alleyway



One night I found a dark alleyway. It was scary like a horror film. i didn’t have any warm clothes to wear.
It was windy and cold I didn’t have a house to stay in so I'll just stay outside for the night. I didn’t have a car to sleep in too. Then I heard a creepy squeaky door opening. So i ran ohh no I screamed.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2018 at 12:04 PM

    I like your detail you put into your writing. Maybe you could fix up your writing.
    From Azzy.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 19, 2019 at 1:46 PM

    I like your story but fix your spelling

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  3. AnonymousDecember 17, 2019 at 12:02 PM

    Hi blake i like the cliff hanger and the detail and maybe next time have a detail of the thing that chased you to give more of a scare.

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